Review: The Bone Witch (The Bone Witch, #1) by Rin Chupeco || A Slow-Burn Villain Origin Story

Let me be clear: I never intended to raise my brother from his grave, though he may claim otherwise.

Publication date: March 7th 2017

Publisher: Sourcebooks Fire

Age group & genre: Young Adult Fantasy

Synopsis:  When Tea accidentally resurrects her brother from the dead, she learns she is different from the other witches in her family. Her gift for necromancy means that she’s a bone witch, a title that makes her feared and ostracized by her community. But Tea finds solace and guidance with an older, wiser bone witch, who takes Tea and her brother to another land for training.

In her new home, Tea puts all her energy into becoming an asha-one who can wield elemental magic. But dark forces are approaching quickly, and in the face of danger, Tea will have to overcome her obstacles…and make a powerful choice.

Content Warning/s: Cutting to invoke magic

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Prior to finding out that Rin Chupeco is a Filipino author and hearing everyone’s praises for The Shadowglass, the final book in this series, I had no interest in picking this book up. I had heard a lot of complaints about it being slow. Though I can see where people are coming from, I still enjoyed the plot very much.

The Bone Witch follows the journey, recounted by present Tea, of young Tea, who discovers her necromancy powers and subsequently trains to become an asha. Much of the plot simply follows Tea’s training, but through this, we’re given an intimate look of what an asha’s life is like, and I loved it. I especially loved the concept of the hua, a dress that all asha wear, with designs that are particular to their personality.

More than that, I loved getting to see Tea in the present. In this review’s title, I called The Bone Witch a villain origin story, and that’s because Tea’s situation in the present chapters is akin to that of a villain’s. She’s been exiled, and she’s raising an army of daeva, mythical monsters that have plagued her world for centuries. I am so excited to learn about how she got to this point, and how she’s gonna use this army.

However, I had such a problem with the writing and world building. Throughout the book, I constantly had to reread sentences because I just couldn’t absorb them. I don’t know if any of you have encountered this problem too, but I take this as a sign of faulty writing that doesn’t flow very easily.

Countries and cities were just name dropped, and by the end of the book, I still couldn’t get a good grasp of their defining attributes. I also had a hard time understanding the heartsglass system. In the eight kingdoms, everyone has to wear a heartsglass around their necks, and their heartsglasses change color according to what they’re feeling. It took me a long time to grasp just why everyone had to wear heartsglasses, and how this system worked in general.

World building aside, let’s talk about the characters.

Tea Pahlavi– I much preferred present Tea to younger Tea. I didn’t dislike younger Tea, but she wasn’t that memorable to me. I’m much more interested in seeing how present Tea plans to conquer the whole eight kingdoms with her dead lover and an army of monsters by her side.

Fox Pahlavi– I appreciated the strong sibling bond depicted between him and Tea, and I’m excited to learn what exactly happened between them. Much like younger Tea, he just wasn’t that memorable.

Lady Mykaela– Getting to learn about her past was so heartbreaking and I felt so much for her. I love the student-mentor bond she formed with Tea, and I really hope she gets a happy ending.

There is no greater strength than the ability to understand and accept your own flaws.

Prince Kance– Tea has a schoolgirl crush on him, because well, he’s a prince and he’s handsome, but I found him pretty bland, and it’s obvious that Tea isn’t gonna end up with him.

Lord Kalen– Kalen does fill the brooding boy with a tragic past trope, but I’m trash for him anyway. I’m so excited to learn more about him and see his relationship with Tea progress.

Likh– Likh is probably on the trans spectrum! I think this is gonna be explored more and confirmed in the sequels, but in the mean time, I adored how Chupeco used Likh’s character to question gender roles.

Then perhaps we should carve a world one day where the strength lies in who you are rather than in what they expect you to be.

Overall, what I appreciated the most about The Bone Witch was getting to see Tea become an asha. I loved following her entertain guests at parties, while learning how to use death magic at the same time. I simply had such a hard time with this book’s writing and world building.

The Verdict: 🌟🌟🌟

The Bone Witch is the perfect example of 3-star books not being bad books. I still enjoyed it a lot, and I’m so excited to continue on with this series, no matter how bad I am at reading sequels!

Have you read this book? Do you plan to?

20 thoughts on “Review: The Bone Witch (The Bone Witch, #1) by Rin Chupeco || A Slow-Burn Villain Origin Story

    1. me too! I really hope I love the sequels more because I see so much potential in them! I’m glad that you enjoyed it as well. that’s probably gonna be me in the future, because I put off sequels so much ahhhh! and it all comes back to bite me in the ass because I have bad memory, and so I’m faced with the dilemma of rereading the previous book even if I don’t want to, or just powering through haha

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      1. Yeah I’m all about characters becoming villains so I’m eager to see what the sequels will have in store! Lol yes I feel that so much. When I can, I use bookseriesrecaps .com but I’ve heard that the recaptains have good recaps too! Either way, it’s a life saver!

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  1. I don’t think you’re alone in how you felt about this book. This author has a couple new ones coming out with great looking covers and titles, but I’m hesitant to add them because I’ve heard the writing has some issues. Great review!

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    1. I don’t think I am as well. same, I mainly read this because I wanted to read their older works first before diving into their new ones. but the new ones look so good and they are the ones intriguing me the most! i have heard that as well, but I want to try for myself, and I guess I’m just gonna go in with an open mind and hopefully won’t get disappointed. Thank you so much!

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  2. Great review, Caitlin! I rated this one 3 stars as well, and agree that the writing was difficult to absorb at times! The world building and relations between kingdoms is confusing, but there is a glossary in the sequel, the Heart Forger that helped cleared this all up a bit more! And, I was much more invested in older Tea as well. I hope you love the Heart Forger if you read it! I personally liked it more than the Bone Witch! ❤

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    1. thank you so much! right? it was hard because I was enjoying the book, but the writing just wasn’t clicking with me 😦 There was a glossary in the paperback I had of the first one too, but I sadly didn’t discover it until I finished the book haha. I’ll keep that in mind as I read THF though! I’m so excited to read The Heart Forger!

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  3. The premise of this book sounds really interesting! I do hate it though when the world-building doesn’t pull through. But it doesn’t always take away from my enjoyment of the book, it just ends up leaving me a lil’ bit confused 😂 I also have sometimes where I have three starred books I really enjoy and some that I don’t at all, rating books is so difficult 😅

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    1. It really is, even though I honestly don’t think it’s explained really well, but maybe I’m just dense 🤷🏻‍♀️ so glad you’re like that with worldbuilding, because it’s one of the most important things for me! WHAT A MOOD. Rating systems are so confusing and I always have an existential crisis about mine 😭😂


  4. I’ve have seen this book around when the finale got released and have been interested in it so I am so excited to be able to hear all your thoughts!!
    It definitely sounds like an interesting concept– a villain origin story! We don’t get enough of these and it certainly sounds like a interesting magic system. It is a shame the world building was slightly confusing as it can make it hard work when you don’t feel like you understand it. Hopefully it will be better in the sequels!!
    Huas sound amazing– designed to their personality 😍😍 AMAZING — I would what mine would be!! 😂
    The characters sound interesting– brooding boy with tragic past!! Yes I would love that!! 😂
    Great review– I’m glad you enjoyed this book even if a few bits did fall short for you!! 💛

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    1. Same! The pushing point for me to read it was when everyone was raving about the final book!
      Yes, if you’re there for the magic system and villain origin story, you really won’t be disappointed! Yeah, I was slagging through it in the beginning and honestly until the end as well, but then I think I got a little used to it. I hope so too and I think it will!
      Yes they are!! Ahh—the way they’re designed and how they’re described is beautiful! Same, I wonder what mine would be too 😅
      Yes, Kalen is a cliche but ahhh I’m so fascinated with him! Plus, it’s obvious that he and tea are gonna end up together so i am wondering how that’s gonna happen 😂
      Thank you, & I’m glad too! Even though a few things weren’t for me, I am so happy I read this book and I totally recommend it still!

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